Responding to Student Papers with Audio


Over the years, I have intermittently used audio to comment on student writing. I have used it in both face-to-face and in online classes. The students seem to like it, and there seems to be substantial research that supports the benefits of this way of responding, as opposed to scribbling notes on the margins, or even typing on a draft. The main benefit, according to this research, seems to be that student writers tend to see such aural feedback as more "holistic." They look for a "general impression" about their writing on the part of the instructor rather than getting stuck on mistakes and comments on writing's minutiae. Of course, there are stages in the writing process when you _are_ looking for them to pay attention to those minutiae, but not always. On the instructor's end, audio comments allow for more extensive and detailed feedback than typing or writing by hand would typically allow.

But how to do it technically? In the past, I have used drop.io, which is a free service which allows you to uploads large media files and then send the link to a an e-mail address. That worked file but I felt like the process of responding and sending the mp3 file links was sort of separate from the process of reading and seeing the paper online.

This time, I have been experimenting with Riffly, a Drupal module which allow to embed audio and video content into Drupal posts.
I think I am going to respond to the next batch of student papers using Riffly right there, on my Drupal-powered class site. I am sticking with audio for this one, so no talking heads.

On the Design of Collaborative Learning Spaces

The second presentation today is by Scott Pobiner who is talking about designing for collaboration. So far, his argument seems to be that we need 3D spaces for effective collaboration, which is ironic because, through no fault of his own, he is speaking from behind a 2D interface of Adobe Connect. We are now looking at a picture of his face, Powerpoint slides, a chat box with a bunch of people chatting, and an interactive poll he created for people to chime in while he is talking.

This is pretty cool: he is analyzing different ways in which people create "physical interfaces" for work and collaboration, by using their bodies (hands, gestures, etc). I wonder if he is moving towards asserting that computer interfaces are too flat. Second Life anyone? I know, I know, it is fake...

So, yes, back to the thesis. It was that (that traditional interfaces are too "flat." But it was also that the physical spaces in which people learn matter. This may not be a new assertion to many readers of this post, but it will be new for some designers of educational buildings that I have worked in.

There is Something Weird....

I know that this is probably Twitter material rather than a blog post, but I do not tweet, so here goes. There is something weird about those live/online events where a group of people gather in a room and watch/hear a presenter with a bunch of Powerpoint slides glide in front of them on a big screen. I am currently at the Educause ELI focus group conducted here at JMU through Adobe Connect. I am hoping for some lively face to face discussions with the people in the room, after the presentation is over.  I am wondering whether a better way for these types of events would not be a live video conference via Skype of some such application, rather than the sound/Powerpoint combination. Oh, and by the way, the topic of the current presentation is assessment of student work online. Also, it seems to me that people who give talks about, essentially, online instructional design, should design more engaging visual presentations than slide after slide of bullet point lists.

Now, to the substance of the talk. A significant part of the talk was dedicated to building trust among collaborating learners. I think this is a topic that is often overlooked in literature, with many scholars, especially in rhetoric and composition, tending to think about collaboration as this "warm and fuzzy" process in which everyone agrees on everything and things go smoothly. I am glad that this speaker mentions the notion that collaborating learners and writers "do not have to like one another" and still get the work done. Conflict and conflict resolution are important parts of the collaborative process. What is even more timely, that one of my graduate students who is also present at this session, jut blogged about this on our class's website.

Preparing for the Spilman Symposium

It is Spilman time again! Every fall the folks at the Virginia Military Institute hold the Spilman Simposium on Issues in Teaching Writing, on whose Advisory Board I sit. It is a great event which always features nationally and internationally recognized writing and rhetoric scholars in a small workshop-like setting. This year's theme is "Teaching Genre" and the featured guests are Cindy Selfe, Chris Anson, and Paul Heilker. Should be a good one, as usual. Also, this year, the program is augmented by Cindy Selfe's "Literacy Stories" presentation.

Last but not least, I have an added task this year--to promote the open access composition project Writing Spaces. My goal is to attract the participants' attention to the project, both as readers and classroom users and as potential contributors to future volumes.

A Review of The Handbook of Research of Virtual Workplaces Published in Technical Communication

Just about a year and a half after Kirk St. Amant and myself published The Handbook of Research of Virtual Workplaces and the New Nature of Business Practices (IGI), the journal Technical Communication published a review of the book, written by Gary Hernandez, a communication manager for BP and frequent contributor of book reviews to the journal. The review is generally positive. Here is a passage from it:

Considering the speed of business and the pace [with which] technological innovations continue to progress, Handbook of research on virtual workplaces and the new nature of business practices runs the risk of depleting its relevancy in a few short years. For the time being, it is bound to prove a great resource for students and practitioners of communication.


While we cannot do anything about the fast pace of the development of technologies, I am pleased that Hernandez thinks that at least for the time being, the book is a good resource.

The Excitement is Growing...

Gotta love the "marketese," by publishers. Since I contributed a chapter to the book mentioned in the excerpt from a publisher e-mail below, they sent me this:

As you may know, the excitement is growing around the release of Cases on Successful E-Learning Practices in the Developed and Developing World: Methods for the Global Information Economy, which includes your excellent research contribution.  This book has just entered its production stage and we are projecting a release date of November 2009. On behalf of the staff at IGI Global, I would like to be the first to congratulate you on this admirable achievement. We are all very eager to see the IT Education community’s response to this exceptional publication.

The excitement is growing, no doubt...

Writing Spaces Update

It has been a while since I posted an update on the progress of the open access composition text Writing Spaces which I am co-editing with Charlie Lowe. WS is a peer edited collection of essays on college composition (at least that is its scope for now), which we are developing in partnership with Parlor Press and the WAC Clearinghouse.

After receiving over 100 proposals and selecting about 60 last spring, we broke the accepted proposals into two volumes. The first volume essays are currently being reviewed by the members of our editorial board, and the volume is on schedule to be published in late winter or early spring. The second volume will follow shortly thereafter.

Promoting the project remains a priority, so I will be showcasing it during the annual Spilman Symposium on Issues in Teaching Writing to be help next weekend at the Virginia Military Institute.

IKEA Changes Fonts and Infuriates Fans



About a week ago, a friend of mine told me that he had heard there was some outrage online about IKEA's new font choice. At the time, I didn't know what that was all about , so I looked into it. Fonts, what's big deal, you ask. Well, apparently, it is a huge deal if you are IKEA and if, all of a sudden, you decide to switch the typography in your corporate identity to Verdana. What is the fuss all about? According to many sources I have seen, people are outraged that Verdana, a Microsoft-invented font which is meant to be used online, is now being used by IKEA in print publications and signs.

I am not quite sure what to make of it at this point: are so many people all that educated about typography, and do they have a point? Or, is it just fuss over nothing? One thing is for sure: whatever consulting firm IKEA had hired to mastermind this switch did not do its homework before proposing the changes.

Having just read and written about all this, I want to see the movie Helvetica, which is mentioned so frequently in discussions surrounding IKEA's decision to change fonts. So I headed over to the website of my university library and, Yay!, they have a DVD. So I am going to borrow it for a few days and educate myself about typography. Well, some parts of it, at least.

Design and Implementation of Educational Video Games Sent to the Publisher

For the past year or so, my colleague Diane Wilcox and I have been working on an edited collection entitled Design and Implementation of Educational Video Games. Diane and I came to this project from two somewhat different perspectives. She is an instructional designer, I am a rhetorician and a communicator. That is what made this project so interesting, in large part. I am happy to report that last night, we sent the final version of the manuscript to our publisher, IGI Global. Nothing much to say here...

Call for Articles: Special Issue, Professional Communication in Global Contexts

EEE Transactions on Professional Communication
Special Issue Focus: Professional Communication In Global Contexts

Deadline for Proposals: December 31, 2009

Guest Editors: Pavel Zemliansky, James Madison University, USA;

Constance Kampf, University of Aarhus, Denmark

Overview

Most literature in technical communication published in the United States focuses on the state of the discipline in North America. Despite some recent and notable exceptions, such as books, articles, and special issues of professional journals dedicated to intercultural communication and translation studies, the scope of the coverage of our discipline outside of North America remains rather limited.

However, the theory and practice of technical communication in Europe, Asia, South America, and other places deserve closer attention. Substantial differences between the state of the discipline in North America and abroad impact our work in this globalized world, as well as our current students' future professional practice. For example, technical communication theory and practice in the U.S. typically emerge from Rhetoric and Writing Studies as well as from Communication Studies. Competence in multiple languages is usually not required for obtaining a degree or working in the field. In contrast, in Western Europe, technical communication as a discipline is heavily influenced by the theory and practice of translation and language for specific purposes due to the multilingual and multicultural nature of the space in which technical communicators operate. Similarly, in countries like Ukraine and Russia, instruction in technical communication is often within schools of business or engineering.

As practitioners, teachers, and scholars of technical communication, how can we improve our understanding of our field in a globalized world and beyond the theories and practices which dominate our work in North America? For this special issue, we invite articles that examine the theory, practice, and teaching of technical communication in Canada, Mexico, Europe, Africa, Asia, Australia and South America. We are particularly interested in the disciplinary and cultural contexts from which Technical Communication research and education is emerging, and the implications of these origins for theory, practice and teaching. 


Possible Topics for Articles

Possible topics, issues and questions to be examined in this issue include but are not limited to:
 
  • Which theoretical perspectives and disciplinary roots affect technical communication practice in different countries?
  • How do global contexts affect the practice of technical communication in different regions? 
  • To what extent and how do contrastive rhetoric and cross-cultural communication theory and practice influence professional communication on different continents and in different countries? 
  • How can global contexts inform genre studies,including the impact of cultural and organizational settings on genre theory and practice? 
  • How can we learn about global contexts through the development and implementation of cross-country and cross-cultural online and face-to-face teaching and research projects which involve both faculty and students?
  • Topics focusing on the influence of global contexts in the theory, practice, and teaching of: usability, web design, including designing for the "social" web (web 2.0, web 3.0) ,cultural and other cross-border considerations in the design, deployment, and use of content-management systems,graphic and visual design, electronic collaboration ,translation and interpretation, technical writing and editing

Production Schedule

  • December 31 2009 Proposals (up to 300 words) due to the guest editors Pavel Zemliansky (zemliapx@jmu.edu) and Constance Kampf (cka@asb.dk
  • February 28 2010. Authors notified of acceptance 
  • March 2010 Complete manuscripts due for review 
  • May  2010 Review results back to authors
  • September 2011 Publication of the special issue


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